Hello Jesus

I'm very sad to see that having the ability to write well inn English your blog is almost empty. You have the writing exam and one more post. :(

Ms. Julia

WRITING EXAM

A SUCCESS STORY


My success story is aboout winning a gold medal in a natianal competition of karate.

It all started in june 2006, 10 years ago when i was 11 years old, i went to the national tournament of karate in Guadalajara, Jalisco. This is my biggest success in my childhood because i was the best one in my category of all the country. The best thing of everything is that i wasn´t a black belt karateca and my sensei tell me to participate with black belts because i was really good, and she was right because i won the first place in my category been a green belt karateca.
When i won the first place, people that was there didnt believed that i won the first place because i was a green belt, i remember that i started to cry of the emotion and then my sensei came at me to hug me and congratulate me.
At the day of today i still remember that moment because it was one of the best moments of my life and that teached to never give up and be a successfull person.




JESUS ALONSO GONZALEZ.

FW: Assignment

 

Please do Exercises A, B, and C in a reply to this post.

Ms. Julia Garza

Everyday work on building your 

dreams, or others will hire you

to build theirs.

A

When I was 17, I wanted to go to college, but I didn't finish high school. I needed one more credit, so I decided to take art history at night school. It was great. I was always liking art - even before I took that course . The teacher was pretty cool. She played classical music in class. I guess that's when I learned to love Mozart. She asked us to write an essay on a famous artist, so I chosen Vincent van Gogh. I didn't start my essay until the night before I was due because I worked at my uncle's store all semester. I sat down to write, but I left all my art books at work. I only had a book of van Gogh's letters to his brother, Theo. Also I forgot to buy paper. So for my essay I wrote letters from Theo to Vincent on my mother's fancy writing paper! My teacher loved it. I leave till the last minute. It often works out!

B

1. It´s possible that

2. when i think aboutb it

3. anyway, getting back to my story,

4. looking back

5. so anyway

C