Monday, April 25, 2016
WRITING EXAM
A SUCCESS STORY
My success story is aboout winning a gold medal in a natianal competition of karate.
It all started in june 2006, 10 years ago when i was 11 years old, i went to the national tournament of karate in Guadalajara, Jalisco. This is my biggest success in my childhood because i was the best one in my category of all the country. The best thing of everything is that i wasn´t a black belt karateca and my sensei tell me to participate with black belts because i was really good, and she was right because i won the first place in my category been a green belt karateca.
When i won the first place, people that was there didnt believed that i won the first place because i was a green belt, i remember that i started to cry of the emotion and then my sensei came at me to hug me and congratulate me.
At the day of today i still remember that moment because it was one of the best moments of my life and that teached to never give up and be a successfull person.
JESUS ALONSO GONZALEZ.
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Hello Jesus,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story! Congratulations on your achievement! :)
I'm also happy to see that your writing is quite good. Be sure to capitalize necessary words, above all the 'i's.
Grade: 100
Ms. Julia :)